Ahiahi Maria Bloggers,
For this activity I had to create my own chorus. The reasoning behind my chorus is that in life you have to keep trying because anything achievable if you don't give up. I found it challenging to write my chorus especially starting it, but once I started it got easier. I am a very bad singer so it was extremely difficult to record it. I have added my audio recording for you guys to listen too.
Let me know what you guys think of my chorus.
Thanks for coming to my blog
Kia Ora Marwah,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I thought your song was very beautiful and inspiring, it shares a great message of persevering and never giving up. I especially like the lyric “everybody makes mistakes, but they keep trying”. I would be interested to know what inspired you to write this song.
Great job taking up the challenge and posting a video of yourself singing, hearing you sing the lyrics and hearing the tune of the song was very helpful to hear how the lyrics flow together.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
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