a script about a boy with his dog

Hello bloggers, Today we had to write a description of the boy  or the dog the story is about a boy that hates his disabled dog.

here is my script:I was sitting on the couch and playing video games until my mum came in with a box she said, “it’s a beautiful day”. She opened the curtains then said, “open your present” Her phone was ringing so she answered the phone and she went upstairs.I paused my video game and opened one half of the box then a puppy popped up and frightened me. I said, “oh” and picked him up  then I looked at his paws and he had three legs one leg was broken and missing.

I chucked him on the ground and said, “eh” then he came back to me. I kicked him he saw a ball and got it and gave to me then I kicked the ball and he went and got it and he got stuck in the box. I felt sorry for him. I grabbed the ball with my hand and put it in my pocket.

I put my leg like his, got crutches and went outside with my dog. I called out to my mum and said, “I’m going outside!” and I went and threw the ball that was in my pocket.That was the day with my dog.

I hoped you enjoyed it bye